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My Tunnel Story

The  Tunnel

One day there were  two boys Jeff and Max  that were supposed to be sleeping in bed but only one boy was sleeping. Max wasn't in bed he was in a tunnel inside their backyard. Jeff was looking everywhere but he could not find him so Jeff went back to bed. In the morning he tried looking again and found an odd tunnel. Jeff thought Max was in the tunnel so he went to find Max but when Jeff got out of the tunnel Jeff saw a whole new world.

Jeff look around but he could not find Max so Jeff looked around even more  but still could not find him. So Jeff had a walk around. Jeff found a dog under a tree and named the dog Alice.

Jeff and Alice looked for Max and found a house made of candy. Jeff was hungry so he ate some candy but they did not know that inside the house. There was a witch that loved children. The witch grabbed Jeff's hand and suddenly Alice bit the witch's hand.

Jeff and Alice ran away and stopped to rest under a tree. Jeff looked around and found three houses - a hay house,  a wooden house and a brick house. Jeff found a wolf huffing and puffing at the hay and the wooden house. The pigs from the houses were gone. They had run to safety in the brick house. Suddenly Jeff grabbed a stick and hit the wolf. Jeff and Alice ran away very fast. Jeff ran until he stopped at a cave. It was a bear cave. Jeff could hear Max crying so much. The man inside the cave had a pet bear tied up along with Max! Alice got angry at the man so she ran into the cave with Jeff following close behind. Suddenly Alice bit the man on the bum bum and the man ran away crying. The bear was chained up to a pole so Jeff untied it and Max. Max was so happy to see him! When Max, Jeff and Alice got home Mum asked “Is this your dog? “Yes” Jeff replied. The next day Mum, Jeff and Max bought a dog house and that was the end of the tunnel story.

By Lucas

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